Today we presented our pitch to Dominique and our peers to see if the pitch is strong enough to present to our current corporate video client. I tried to connect to the people watching our presenting, it was important for us to sell our idea and show that we know about our client and what will prove effective for them on our desired video. Dominique credited our presentation but also provided constructive criticism for example to provide a stronger representation of girls in the programme and also to provide the questions needed to ask the client regarding updated information. Ayaan has given us feedback stating it was very informative, it felt professional and the use of examples allowed us to acknowledge what the options are. We have taken all feedback into consideration and now aim to improve our pitch to the best of our ability to impress our client.
How will you address these points?
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